This was a poem that I wrote for Reading Hour Magazine. Apparently, It didn't got published but unlike my previous two attempts, I got a feedback by email. It said, ''Dear Jane, Thank you for writing - am sorry we can't publish the poem. All the best..." .. Was that a great feedback, I don't know.. Anyway, here's my poem about a typical Indian government hospital .....
My Day in the Hospital…
By Jane Mary Kurian
A cough,
A sneeze. And-
I knew
what I was
looking at.
A Hospital, with floors
swept in Eve’s
time,
walls boasted
of cobwebs, Paans
and gums .
“A government
hospital indeed,” I said.
I joined
the queue to
consult the doctor,
But the
queue grew larger
and larger
Yet patience
lived among the
patients.
It might
be dusk when
the name gets
called
Yet there’s
hope that it
would get called.
Hence, I
stood there with
all my neighbours.
The time’s
ticking away, faster and
faster,
So did
the casualty room
near me grew
larger-
With bruises
and fractures and
deaths by night.
So did
new friendships in the Queue-
Starting
from what’s your
disease to –
What might
be your disease
tomorrow..
While the
disease horoscopes and
theories got busy,
The day
ran faster crossing
its 24hour limits.
Finally, my name was
called. “Breathe..”
I stepped
in and came
out with a
list,
Yet still
confused on whether
the doctor-
Had cared to
look up from
his note to
my face.
“I don’t
know. Still I got a list
in my hand.”
But Before
stepping out of the premises,
I
turned back and
offered a smiling
goodbye-
To my
new-found friends. Then, I stepped out,
To find
a shop working
27hours a day..
Because my
day in the
hospital-
Had crossed
24hours limit, my
friend!!!
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